I’ve got 60k problems and my intro ain’t one

Future Grim is a universe devoid of culture and commanded solely by warring corporations. These corps battle for the wealth of human resources, in bouts of so called bloody business.

Kennerman are the no. two of the top five. It is up to Francis Kennerman and his his loyal COs to take back the top spot from the mysterious Alberton. The no. three, Volan, headed by Nigel will undermine the rules and regulations to seize the top spot for himself.

Disloyalty, dishonesty and desertion will not be tolerated. The Future is Grim.


I’ve had problems, editing problems.

60k> words isn’t easy to edit. I’ve been churning through the early chapters, but then I find myself slipping backwards to the first chapter. I polish it and repeat. The first two parts of the six are better than ever, however the rest hasn’t been touched in over a year. I’ve had to implement a colour coded ‘do not touch’ system to attempt some form of progression.

post dune

The good news is I’ve started listening to some audiobooks while doing my brain absent job. I got around to experiencing Dune, which turns out has similar concepts. It’s been great inspiration for me and I’ve called this period of writing the ‘post Dune’ era. What I enjoyed the most was the way exposition was handled. In my own initial drafts I now know that I left out too much information to the point the reader wouldn’t understand.

I’ve also listened to Snow Crash, which was equally amazing. I’m always up for some sci-fi recommendations.

My goal now is to polish each part to a certain level and then move on. I’ve given myself to the end of this week to create a first part that I’m happy with.

In other news, my mate has been creating mechanical keyboard reviews. I recently created an intro for him, so it makes sense to give him a shout out. It’s interesting and worth a look if you like things technical (also he has a deep and soothing voice :P).

Till next time…

Kyle

 

Day 1: Camp Nanowrimo 2015

I am utilizing Camp Nanowrimo2015 to edit my WIP Novel, Future Grim: Origins.

My goal is 70k words and currently I’ve got 58,000. It means I need to write 400 a day in April to hit the mark. The first problem I’ve stumbled at is that editing severely reduces word count. I’m currently down 100 words already and I’ve only been working for a couple of hours.

Though a deadline has definitely helped as it has given me a goal. This is the most dedicated I’ve been in weeks.

On the art side, I created a few character icons and collected them into a tasty poster thing. The Kennerman and Volan cast are present. They are created by digitally altering photographs in photoshop. I can’t draw this good yet.

 

 

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My mate is also attempting to write in April and we’ve created a Camp cabin. It appears it is mostly filled with ertoic fiction writers. Not what I was expecting but I’m sure it will be a laugh.

Laters,

Kyle.